Ashleigh- I like how you have used the big picture for the spread, it looks very professional and I like how the text goes across the curtain. I think that you need to make the corners bolder though because I can’t really see the page numbers.
Alex- I love this page but I don’t know if there is enough text used? You could make the image smaller or move it over to the side so that there is more room for text.
Hamish- I really like this page but the corners seem wasted, you could make them more useful by putting features on them like what is on the next page or something?
Perry- The quote used on this page is a different style to the rest of the titles used across your products, you should probably change this because it looks unprofessional and lazy.
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